Thinking over what can/will do here on deviantart, I've decided that I'm going to use you all as guinea pigs, or to apple-polish it a little, my creative outlet. As I spoke in an earlier update, I've been focusing a lot on my writing. I'm doing it every day.

The point here is that I'm going to be posing up a series of "works in progress". This is by no means snip-it’s from a book or story I'm writing, but merely what comes out of my head (granted it's been self edited a few times, you don't really want to see the raw stuff... it's terrifying)

My want here, really, is feedback. What you think of the subject matter, how I went about it, and what you think could be better. Honestly I really would rather not have people come through and say "you suck" "don't quit your day job" "why do you write this crap". That kind of attitude will not be tolerated.

That's all I want to share today, I hope you enjoy the journey into my imagination